Comments for Rainnsnow's Weblog http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Wed, 31 Dec 2008 06:16:08 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Poem #8-March of the Monarchs by johnny http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/march-of-the-monarchs-2/#comment-16 johnny Wed, 31 Dec 2008 06:16:08 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=36#comment-16 Thanks for good post Thanks for good post

]]> Comment on Poem# 10- Letters of Love and Madness by se1985 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem-10-letters-of-love-and-madness/#comment-14 se1985 Thu, 01 May 2008 05:12:46 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem-10-letters-of-love-and-madness/#comment-14 I like the word choices in here, the whole poem has a nice flow and good imagery. I like the word choices in here, the whole poem has a nice flow and good imagery.

]]> Comment on Poem #8-March of the Monarchs by amebel http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/march-of-the-monarchs-2/#comment-13 amebel Tue, 08 Apr 2008 03:44:20 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=36#comment-13 this is so beautiful, it filled my mind with images, I really enjoyed it. this is so beautiful, it filled my mind with images,
I really enjoyed it.

]]> Comment on Poem #8-March of the Monarchs by Jessica http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/march-of-the-monarchs-2/#comment-12 Jessica Tue, 08 Apr 2008 03:21:47 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=36#comment-12 This was very beautifully written and full of imagery and description, you did a wonderful job! This was very beautifully written and full of imagery and description, you did a wonderful job!

]]> Comment on Poem# 7 February Sun Rise by iam1337 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem-7-february-sun-rise/#comment-11 iam1337 Tue, 01 Apr 2008 08:29:25 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=31#comment-11 i liked the idea of the beach that you used. i don't know if you meant to but it makes a lot of sense with the way waves move back an forth. writing a poem in this style with the beach in mind seems to work very well. i liked the idea of the beach that you used. i don’t know if you meant to but it makes a lot of sense with the way waves move back an forth. writing a poem in this style with the beach in mind seems to work very well.

]]> Comment on Poem# 7 February Sun Rise by Jessica http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem-7-february-sun-rise/#comment-10 Jessica Tue, 01 Apr 2008 02:41:11 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=31#comment-10 This is a beautiful poem chalk full of wonderful imagery, good job! This is a beautiful poem chalk full of wonderful imagery, good job!

]]> Comment on Poem#5 Haiku by amebel http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem5-haiku/#comment-9 amebel Tue, 26 Feb 2008 02:33:58 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=27#comment-9 Always nice and clear to the end, except maybe the "Daffodils" poem, I don't quite understand the image..it might need a connection between the three items cited, I'm not sure. I really like the first one and the eclipse one, and in Road rage I can almost see it, it's very vivid, good job. Always nice and clear to the end,
except maybe the “Daffodils” poem, I don’t quite understand the image..it might need a connection between the three items cited, I’m not sure.

I really like the first one and the eclipse one,
and in Road rage I can almost see it, it’s very vivid,
good job.

]]> Comment on Poem#5 Haiku by tipsypoet28 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem5-haiku/#comment-8 tipsypoet28 Mon, 25 Feb 2008 23:41:09 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=27#comment-8 A great idea for a poem, your collection of ideas was really interesting in the way you combined all of these. Each Haiku was specific and to-the-point. A great idea for a poem, your collection of ideas was really interesting in the way you combined all of these. Each Haiku was specific and to-the-point.

]]> Comment on Poem #4-Wild Desert Tulip by Jessica http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem-4-wild-desert-tulip/#comment-7 Jessica Mon, 18 Feb 2008 22:15:00 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=25#comment-7 The imagery is stunning and beautiful and the alluding to the trials the tulip faces and withstands clear. I love the idea and execution of this poem, you did a wonderful job! The imagery is stunning and beautiful and the alluding to the trials the tulip faces and withstands clear. I love the idea and execution of this poem, you did a wonderful job!

]]> Comment on Poem #4-Wild Desert Tulip by garamirez http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/poem-4-wild-desert-tulip/#comment-6 garamirez Mon, 18 Feb 2008 11:41:37 +0000 http://rainnsnow.wordpress.com/?page_id=25#comment-6 I really enjoyed your poem. You used extended metaphors (comparing the tulip to a woman), similes, and vivd imagery to create a wonderful picture for the reader. It was a great read. I really enjoyed your poem. You used extended metaphors (comparing the tulip to a woman), similes, and vivd imagery to create a wonderful picture for the reader. It was a great read.

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