Poem# 7 February Sun Rise
Chill of an early February morning breeze
numbing pale toes on a white sand beach
soft light seeping through a fading night,
warm water creeping up the Golf Coast.
Numbing pale toes on a white sand beach
on Anna Maria Island as the sun peeks in
like warm water creeping up the Golf Coast,
welcoming a current of family affections.
On Anna Maria Island as the sun peeks in,
with golden generosities radiating warmth
like welcoming a current of family affections,
amongst the songs of seagulls in gleeful flight.
With golden generosities radiating warmth
rising with the harmonic laughter of children,
like waking songs of seagulls in gleeful flight
excited to feel the stream of a fresh day’s air.
Chill of an early February morning breeze,
soft light seeping through a fading night
with golden generosities radiating warmth
amongst the songs of seagulls in gleeful flight.
This is a beautiful poem chalk full of wonderful imagery, good job!
i liked the idea of the beach that you used. i don’t know if you meant to but it makes a lot of sense with the way waves move back an forth. writing a poem in this style with the beach in mind seems to work very well.